How to start a novel? Creating curiosity is key. Read examples of first lines from novels that provoke questions, plus tips to avoid info dump beginnings and more:
How to start a novel that grabs attention: 10 ideas
Read ideas on how to start a novel and evoke curiosity. Keep reading for more examples and fuller discussion:
- Make first lines raise questions
What will your reader want to know after your novel’s opening lines?
- Intrigue with early actions
What about early actions is teasing, intriguing, or surprising?
- Build worlds and settings via action
Narrated exposition may read long-winded. Find how to start a novel with action that builds background, too.
- Write first scenes that promise conflict
What conflicts, interior to a character or external, could your opening imply? Conflict makes action urgent.
- Build genre-specific tone and mood
Feel-good romance and crime/mystery readers look for different things in a story. Build genre-appropriate tone and mood from page one.
- Weave exposition in lightly
Keep backstory and other information (such as what your character looks like) relevant to the unfolding action.
- Share an unusual image or thought
Many great novels begin with a striking image or paradox, an unusual thought or statement.
- Try starting a novel with disaster
English literature teacher Annie Dillard said to start with your deaths and diseases.
- Experiment with short first chapters
Some novels start with chapters mere paragraphs long. What will tease readers and leave them wanting more?
- End first scenes with open questions
Has your first scene given away too much of the game, or just enough?
Let’s dig deeper into these ideas on how to write first chapters that sell your story:
Make first lines raise questions
If there’s one rule on how to start a novel, it’s to make your reader curious. This applies whether you’re writing literary or genre fiction.
When we polled our newsletter subscribers, it was clear that leaving questions is crucial for reader engagement:
What will your first line leave your reader wanting answers for?
Here are some first lines from The Guardian‘s list of the best books of the 21st Century:
Intriguing novel beginnings – literary and genre fiction examples
‘So now get up.’Hilary Mantel, Wolf Hall (2009).
Felled, dazed, silent, he has fallen; knocked full length on the cobbles of the yard.
I told you last night that I might be gone sometime, and you said, Where, and I said, To be with the Good Lord, and you said, Why, and I said, Because I’m old, and you said, I don’t think you’re old.Marilynne Robinson, Gilead (2004).
My name is Kathy H. I’m thirty-one years old, and I’ve been a carer now for over eleven years. That sounds long enough, I know, but actually they want me to go on for another eight months, until the end of this year.Kazuo Ishiguro, Never Let Me Go (2005).
When he woke in the woods in the dark and the cold of the night he’d reach out to touch the child sleeping beside him.Cormac McCarthy, The Road (2006)
Years ago, before the trains stopped running on so many of the branch lines, a woman with a high, freckled forehead and a frizz of reddish hair came into the railway station and inquired about shipping furniture.Alice Munro, ‘Hateship, Friendship, Courtship, Loveship, Marriage’ (2001)
The above first lines span genre from historical fiction (Mantel) to dystopian sci-fi (Ishiguro) and post-apocalyptic (McCarthy). They include Pulitzer- and Booker-winning books and skew more literary.
The above novel and story (the Munro is a short story) beginnings create curiosity by:
- Raising questions: Why has the man in Wolf Hall fallen on the cobblestones? Why does the Priest who narrates Gilead say he may be gone? Who is the man in the woods reaching out to touch the sleeping boy (who it emerges – though implied by this gesture – is his son)?
- Creating intrigue about the story’s setting: Why have the trains stopped running in Munro’s story opening? Why are the man and boy sleeping rough in the woods at the start of McCarthy’s novel The Road?
- Giving key details about ‘who’: Each of the above novel openings give just enough details about ‘who’ – a key character (or characters) – to pique readers’ curiosity. That a woman is a carer who should be retiring soon. That a woman with freckles and red, curly hair is asking about shipping furniture (for a yet unrevealed purpose) at the train station.
What about genre-fiction story openings? Examples from popular fantasy, new adult, mystery, thriller and crime novels:
How to start a genre-fiction book: Examples
The below examples are from Amazon bestsellers (as of October, 2022):
In the week before their final departure to Arrakis, when all the final scurrying about had reached a nearly unbearable frenzy, an old crone came to visit the mother of the boy, Paul.Frank Herbert, Dune (1965).
New adult/contemporary romance:
The way ass whole is misspelled in red spray paint across the back door of Bib’s makes me think about my mother. She would always insert a brief pause between syllables, making it sound like two separate words.Colleen Hoover, It Starts with Us (2022).
“Not again.”Jeneva Rose, The Perfect Marriage (2020)
The disappointment in his voice fills the room and hangs there like a light fog, clouding us from one another.
“This doesn’t feel right, patron.” Isabelle Lacoste’s voice in his earpiece was anxious, verging on urgent.Louise Penny, The Madness of Crowds: A Novel (2021).
Chief Inspector Gamache looked out over the roiling crowd, as the noise in the auditorium rose to a din.
Like the literary examples of opening lines to novels above, these first sentences prompt questions.
The opening of Dune (which ascended the bestseller list again due to the 2021 film adaptation and announced video game) teases questions about what Arrakis is (a desert-like planet). It also makes us curious about the reason for the old crone’s visit.
The other examples prompt questions, too. For example, why someone’s spray-painted ‘ass whole’ across an establishment. Or why Isabelle Lacoste is anxious in her caution to Inspector Gamache.
By now, it should be clear – great openings make us want to know more. They don’t have to be showy or flashy, but they do (ideally) build your reader’s desire to find out.
Intrigue with early actions
George Orwell, another master of how to start a novel, gives us this example in his dystopian classic:
It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.George Orwell, Nineteen Eighty-Four (1949).
Orwell begins with setting and a strange event: Clocks striking an unlikely hour.
The action is teasing because it seems impossible. Modern clocks usually strike up to 12 times, beginning again from ‘one’ for one o’clock.
In the 14th and 15th Centuries, though, clocks that struck 24 times were more common. This strange anachronism (a detail from another time and place) subtly suggests that everything is out of balance.
How can you make your novel’s opening actions teasing? What are characters (or objects) doing that they don’t usually do, or shouldn’t? What is exceptional to the first scene, already underway?
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Build worlds and settings via action
In deciding how to start a novel, you may think a whole chapter narrating every detail about your world is a good idea.
After all, J.R. R. Tolkien wrote a multi-section prologue giving expository details such as the average height of Hobbits in The Fellowship of the Ring.
Epic fantasy readers (used to novels spanning 800-plus pages) may be more forgiving of very long prologues or exposition, though. The average thriller or contemporary romance reader – not so much.
When the story proper starts (Chapter 1), balance world-building exposition (narrating details about your world) with action that weaves this information in organically.
For example, Tolkien does this when his first chapter starts after his prologue:
When Mr. Bilbo Baggins of Bag End announced that he would shortly be celebrating his eleventy-first birthday with a party of special magnificence, there was much talk and excitement in Hobbiton.Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring, p.
A simple action – the announcement of a party – includes worldbuilding information. We get:
- A street name in Hobbiton woven in with Bilbo’s name (‘of Bag End’ which tells us where Bilbo lives (and how people are referred to in Hobbiton by ‘of’ + ‘street’, suggesting intimate regionalism – not the faceless anonymity of a big city)
- How old Bilbo is (the reason for this information – an approaching birthday – makes the information relevant to the moment in the story)
- A sense of Hobbiton’s small-town, rural feeling (how a notable resident’s birthday is the talk of the entire town)
Although this is narrated, and not shown as scene-level action, the exposition is concise and focused on a simple action – rallying Hobbiton for celebrations.
Further examples of using setting to build intrigue
There are many ways to build worlds, a sense of time and place.
Introducing compelling mood and atmosphere at the start of a novel is one way. For example, the opening to Toni Morrison’s Pulitzer-winning novel, Beloved (1987).
124 was spiteful. Full of a baby’s venom. The women in the house knew it and so did the children.Toni Morrison, Beloved (1987)
Morrison’s opening gives away very little but still intrigues us. ‘What is 124? A person? A place?’
In Morrison’s harrowing novel, we quickly learn that ‘124’ is the address of a house haunted by ghosts of a painful history. We soon understand why Morrison uses the unsettling, contradictory-seeming term ‘a baby’s venom’.
Each section of the novel begins with a variation on ‘124 was…’ creating a poetic cycling back, a sense of gravitation towards the house and it’s troubled history.
How else can you start a novel so that you have your reader’s full attention?
Write first scenes that promise conflict
In starting your novel, you might allude to a character’s excitement or concern, implying approaching conflict.
For example, Louise Penny implies why a detective’s one folder is unlike his others:
Armand Gamache sat in the little room and closed the dossier with care, squeezing it shut, trapping the words inside. It was a thin file. Just a few pages. Like all the rest surrounding him on the old wooden floor of his study. And yet, not like all the rest.Louise Penny, A Great Reckoning (2016)
Why is this dossier unlike the others? What is exceptional about this case?
The fact Gamache closes the file as if to ‘trap’ the words inside suggests difficulty, friction. An internal conflict that is exceptional or a thorn in his side. This intrigues us to keep reading.
Build genre-specific tone and mood
The first sentence of a novel, the first sentence of any paragraph, even, is an opportunity to direct your reader’s focus.
It’s an opportunity to build tone and mood that ropes your reader in.
Compare the beginning of a feel-good romance novel to a thriller novel’s first lines:
“Mac, you’ve done it again!” I grinned into my mobile. “You’ve forgotten your notebook.”Julie Shackman, A Secret Scottish Escape (2021).
I glanced round to where his leather-bound journal was lying on the glass coffee table. Beside it was a framed photograph of the two of us by the shores of our local loch.
The tone is suitably light, the mood cozy and intimate (with references to framed photographs, grinning over slips and foibles). It matches what one expects of feel-good romance – relationships at the heart of the story (and nothing gory, violent or tortured).
Now to a thriller opening:
That summer, the summer of ’77, everything had edges.Jess Lourey, ‘Prologue’, The Quarry Girls (2022).
Our laughter, the sideways glances we gave and got. Even the air was blade-sharp. I figured it was because we were growing up. The law might not recognize it, but fifteen’s a girl and sixteen a woman, and you get no map from one land to the next.
This prologue beginning captures a sense of danger, in the reference to sharp edges, the law, ‘even the air’ being ‘blade-sharp’.
Start your novel with tone and mood that suggests what kind of story the reader will get. It will help to signal to readers interested in your kind of story that they’re in the right hands.
Weave exposition in lightly
One of the reasons ‘show, don’t tell’ is said so often is that a lot of telling has an ‘info dump’ effect.
This is something Now Novel writing coach Romy Sommer advises against in this webinar preview on how not to start a novel:
Above, we discussed using action and events in your story to weave in exposition as it becomes relevant to the story.
Think about what your reader needs to know for the present chapter and scene – what can wait until it is more relevant to unfolding action or the most immediate situation?
Share an unusual image or thought
Beginning sentences so often share what is unusual about a situation (like Orwell’s clocks striking thirteen).
Orhan Pamuk’s evocative memoir-meets-travelogue Istanbul about the city of his birth opens with a striking thought from childhood:
From a very young age, I suspected there was more to my world than I could see: somewhere in the streets of Istanbul, in a house resembling ours, there lived another Orhan so much like me that he could pass for my twin, even my double.Orhan Pamuk, Istanbul (2005)
What strikes your story’s narrator as odd, interesting or unusual?
Great novel beginnings share curious images, questions and thoughts.
In Pamuk’s example, the author imagining his own double, living somewhere else in his city, invites us into a child’s world of wonder and imagination.
Try starting a novel with disaster
In deciding how to start a novel, you might choose to begin in medias res. This means ‘without preamble’ or ‘into the midst of things’, in Latin.
It’s very common, especially in genres that demand quicker pacing.
For example in spy stories – Le Carré beginning The Spy Who Came in from the Cold with a British double agent pacing anxiously at a checkpoint, waiting for a contact).
You don’t get much more ‘in the thick of it’ than a disastrous situation or disappointment. Something your character has to fight and grow through from page one.
Writing teacher Annie Dillard (who lectured in English at Wesleyan for 21 years) once advised a student to ‘begin with your deaths and diseases’. High drama, great loss – these are agents of immense change, which is why they make good starting points for novels.
Experiment with short opening chapters
Often the unedited beginnings of manuscripts reflect how tough it is to start.
In the first lines of chapter one, you often find in editing that the author could cut the first few paragraphs without losing much sense.
Anthony Doerr’s opening chapter to All the Light We Cannot See creates a breathless sense of anticipation thanks to its brevity.
Two concise, image-rich paragraphs express that a town is being evacuated during World War II.
End first scenes with open questions
Like first lines, the first scenes of your novel should leave lingering questions. What is known, vs what has not yet been answered?
Questions your opening scene might leave unresolved include:
- Questions of character: Who specific characters are or what their agendas/desires are
- Questions of place: Where will the story lead your characters next, and what will they find when they get there? (such as in Paul’s imminent departure for Arrakis in Dune)
- Curiosity regarding events: What impending events, celebratory or dreaded, approach? What are your characters looking forward to (or shying away from) at this point in your story?
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68 replies on “How to start a novel: Hook readers from page one”
OK, so for the George Orwell line, thirteen is not an impossible hour, it is actually 1:00 pm in military time (thirteen hundred to be exact.) It does add intrigue for most people not used to it, and even for those used to it it conveys a certain mathematical/rigidity/military (state in this case) vibe, so I can see why he used it. It’s also more succinct and poetic than just saying a clumsy-sounding one o’clock or one in the afternoon (this one especially conjures images of a sunny afternoon unless you describe that it wasn’t). Thirteen is just the time. Cold, detached, nothing more to read into it, yet so beautifully stated.
Thanks for pointing that out, Pico. But in terms of the mechanism of a clock, most only strike up to twelve, then strike 1 again for 1 p.m, two for 2, etc. Since these clocks use the analogue system. Perhaps that was a bit unclear. Thanks for reading and weighing in!
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Hi Donald, thank you! Thanks for reading.
I wrote a first line
White. White walls, white ceiling, white floor, a white window frame inviting sunlight into the white room. White bed, white blanket, white door. White. There was an almost sterile feel to the white room; the tiles gleamed as if they were mirrors to a pale world. A chill was in the air.
As always, compelling information with great examples.
Thanks, Jim! Thanks for reading and commenting.
This is interesting and thanks
Thank you, Omari. Thanks for reading.
My novel titled “We the People Are Good to Eat” begins with the words;
“The Island City of Manhattan was a single building, twelve miles long, three miles wide and 2,000 levels high.”
Would anyone be interested in reading further?
Sounds interesting. Curious title – is there a Soylent Green -like twist?
When I originally wrote the novel back in 2009, I posted it on webook.com, where it’s received more than 200 positive reviews. One of them said, “It’s like Soylent Green, meets Logan’s Run, meets Rollerball, meets every teen slasher flick; but done so much better.”
It’s also been compared to “Hunger Games”.
The blurb states:
“In a fatally overpopulated future Earth, all that the people have to eat is each other, and they thank God for every meal.
“In this world, keeping the population trimmed and the meat quota filled is every citizen’s responsibility. Gladiator type combat games are now a high school sport. This is the students’ way of participating in both the population trimming and meat harvest.
“A Cheerleader-Warrior Girl discovers that certain things in this world are not the way that everybody believes. Then things begin to change.”
If you’d like to give it a look, please go to:
Interesting mix of influences. Will have a look.
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the tale.
“Shadows of kids were running on the yellow curtain.”
Is this interesting?
Does sound good, Gary. Perhaps if it were even more teasing it would be more hooky, e.g. ‘The[/their] shadows ran along the yellow curtain’. That way we’re wondering ‘whose/what shadows?”
Sorry I posted wrong at first…
I would be more intrigued by something like
When the yellow curtain got pulled, the shadows of the kids went with it.
I am researching for a work of fiction set on South Africa’s 60s period and have worked on the outline of the novel. And to my surprise these lines struck the back of my mind for the opening of the manuscript; ‘At 41 Professor Suzie Viljoen had given up all hope of ever becoming a mother. Her desire for motherhood had also evaporated, and so had the excruciating ache.’ Wondering if this would hook anyone.
Hi Thabo. I’m sure it would hook readers interested in motherhood or simply interested in learning more about this character and her development. The fact you mention a turning point does already give the character a struggle or challenge so there’s already a sense of stakes.
I know it is not very good, but how can I improve…
“Leo refused to leave my mind when I laid in bed every night. I try and try and try not to think of him, but… it never works. ”
maybe more like…
“Leo was the only thing I thought about when I stared into the dark. I want to let my mind wander elsewhere, but… ”
I am only twelve but have a passion for writing. Thank you.
The third example is maybe the strongest because there’s more of a sense of setting. The second part could be tweaked a little, for less repetition (e.g. ‘I closed my eyes, wishing I could forget, but there he was, even behind my eyelids.’)
Just a suggestion. Vary the language a little, but you’re on the right track and it’s great that you’re passionate about writing. Keep it up!
Maybe try something like this, Emi,
Some boys just can’t take “no” for an answer. Leo’s one of them. Despite the fact I’ve told him to get lost, he keeps coming back, night after night, as I lay innocently sleeping in the comfort of my own bed. I wish he’d leave me alone once and for all. I mean, who keeps giving this boy permission to invade my dreams every night?
Thank you. this helped a lot.
The character has that I had imagine has this exact personality.
Glad to hear… I could see you wanting to say something like that in the 3 paragraphs you shared. Sometimes, a second eye can see it, staring right at you on the page. It’s harder when we’re closer to our characters, sometimes.
Good luck. I’d love to read what you do with it.
Thanks for the great suggestion, Cynthia.
Hi Bridget, My name is Elaine and I am new to the discussion board! I am currently in the process of writing my first Christian novel – completing chapter two a few days ago 🙂
Hi Elaine – thanks for sharing this. I’m glad to hear you’re making progress, keep at it.